17.10.19 WHITE SPACE DAY 4

Thursday's session was a peer assessment morning where we spent an hour looking over our table's work and give critical but fair feedback. It was insightful and helpful to look at where everybody was at with their projects and it made me feel secure that I wasn't behind; everybody seemed to be at the same pace. Each piece of work was really compelling due to how different they all were and how everybody had such contrasting interpretations of what white space was.

My feedback on my work so far on my group was very constructive in enabling me to move forward, as well as, be aware of how an audience perceive my work if that was the final outcome. Here is the feedback I received:

"Very refined and already feels like a final piece"

"I like how there are people moving around in the background of the people, it incorporates daily life into an abstract concept."

"Enjoyed the music"

"Abstract and unique concept to the brief"

"Instead, maybe project the shapes onto a completely blank wall?"

"Move shapes to the beat of the music"

"Maybe the rhythm could be to a heartbeat?"

"Alternatively, project it onto a living room wall. Ornaments around, people doing domestic tasks to show that it is a part of everyday life."

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